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'Fixed' Third Painting on Plexiglass  -  A bad week, but it did somehow nudge me towards realizing the (in retrospect) obvious: The main flaw with the original incarnation of this was the weakness of the brown parts on the main body of the design. It did not create enough contrast with the white background... and the whole point of this exercise was to see how well a sharp design could stand out against white. It also strengthens the main design overall. The brown was just too 'blah'. Otherwise, you can argue about the yellow part in the middle/top.

James Dinnerville  

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